My Max Payne Fan Fic

[sufferin-rebel]

I decided to make my Own Max Payne Fan fic. I thought this was a cool idea. you can comment and tell me whether if it is crap or not.. This is based around one of Max's Buddies. It will take place around MP1.

Nathan: Hey Max

Max: Hello Nath, We Playing Poker with Alex tonight?

Nathan: I think so.

Max: Good.. So how has things been going

Nathan: My Ma has been a little bit Ill but other than that ok, Hey Max can i ask you a favour?

Max: Sure.

Nathan: Well I need some files for a Case im on is it ok if i have a peek at yours

Max: sure knock yourself out.

Nathan: Thanks

*Nathan grabs what he needs*

Nathan: Thanks, I'll read these at home. then come over for the Poker game.

Max: ok

*Nathan Thinking while reading the files* Damn this ain't enough... If im gonna get that Lowlife Scumbag Kaser, Im gonna need more evidence.. Hmmm..?

Ashley: Cmon Son its getting late, all that detective work is going to hurt your eyes..

Nathan: heh thanks for your concern but you ought to get to bed your not well..

Ashley: Well I was just worried about you.. All that work you do will get you killed someday...

As soon she said that it came to me, Justice and all of that other crap.. is it all worth it, I would be happy with a job as a grocerer.. than an Officer.

*Phone ring*

Ashley: Yes?

Alex: Is Nathan there?

Ashley: Why yes.. he is

Alex: put him on..

Nathan: What is it Alex?

Alex: Max's Wife, Michelle and his baby have been murdered..

Nathan: Murdered!! by who..

Alex: by Drug addicts.. they high off some drug known as "V"

Nathan: V? *thinking* Hmm maybe this could be related with my case with Kaser..)

Alex: Yea V for Valkyr.. some type of Desinger drug..

Nathan: Well what now...

Alex: get here... quickly

Nathan: ok im coming

*Nathan gets his coat on*

Nathan: Mom stay in bed.. Im going out to see my friend for a bit there some problems...

*Nathan thinking* I felt guilty leaving her here, Especially after what happened to Max's Wife, You never know what idiot could get through this door... I left a shotgun by my moms door, I told her to use it if she had to...

*Nathan Arrives*

Nathan: So..

Alex: Well right now, Im getting some names for the bodies of the drug addicts.

Nathan: Ok, Here looks like the first on... him!!

I realized how much this is started to be a pain deep inside my brain, looks like my case and the death of Max's Family are linked to Kaser.. the problem is I haven't got any proof and Max will be in a bad state.. so I better not talk to him..

Alex: him? whos him

Nathan: He is one of the Yobs who hangs around Kaser's Gang..

Alex: hmm I will add this to the report...

*A week later at Max's Family's Funeral*

Nathan: Max, I hope your ok...

Max: Ok? my Wife and Daughter have been murdered.. what can I do?

Nathan: Listen we could find out the Brains behind who Planned this, This aint a Disorganized Attack.

Max: your saying some1 wanted to kill my wife and Baby?

Nathan: Yes and if we find enought Evidence we can find him and bring him to justice...

Max: hmmm well, *sniffs* can we talk about this next week.. cause..

Nathan: yea i know,


*A While after that Roscoe street station Mission in MP1*

BB: Hey Nathan I need your help with something

Nathan: Sure.. I was heading to Roscoe Street station..

BB: Well I need you to head to the Pawn shop at 11 Isle Lane..

Nathan: Ok..

Hmmm I know that place.. full of yobs, *Takes Berreta*
BB is up to something.. just dont know what.. Well looks like my first proper assigment has begun...

P.S sorry for this to sound crap.. my first fan fic, I will write more..

[Mariamus]

well, I already pm'ed you about it. but go right ahead

[sufferin-rebel]

Yea.. Thxs for the PM Marimus! http://forums.3drealms.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif

As I got in my car and drove off to my Destination, I thought about where i was going. BB is just probally wanting me to clean up his work... As usual he probally leave a snitch there to give me info... I soon arrived at my destination thinking that I been here like Lambs to the slaughter..

Mob: Ohh look another DT!

Hmm how did they know?

Mob2: well we dont like your kind around here... Jimmy, Kuld get here and do your job, I would be I got to go to Ragny

By "Ragny" I presume he means that Gothic Nightclub Ragnarock

Jimmy: Ok people be quick about this?

Nathan: So you people wanna play tough? We can do this the easy way or the hard way.

By that I mean give me the Gun or Die like a Cockroach on the other end of some1's shoe.

Kuld: Hhahaha Dont think so... officer..

*The Mobsters shoot*

*Nathan dodges it*

I was startin to dodge these bullets like the rain that come upon me, then I looked up on the roof, I saw a Mysterious person with, a Sniper Rifle.. that person was aiming in my direction, My Black Underwear are no longer black..

But suddenly God gave me hope. The Mysterious person Shot all of the mobsters.. then the Person went away.

I went to Inspect the bodies.. I took the bullets and called a Squad to Investigate this matter... BB was up to something.. I don't know but... He is certainly arousing my Suspicous... When I went back home.. I got a Phone call..

????: Hello? is this Mr Klenland?

Nathan: Yes it is..

????: Hello, This is Doctor Freeman of the Medical Ward..

Nathan: Whats wrong? Is my mother ok?

Dr Freeman: I am afraid... She died an hour ago..

Nathan: What!?!

Dr Freeman: Yes, she died of Breast Cancer.

Suddenly my world felt Black as the moonless night, I did expect her to die.. but not so soon..

Nathan: Ok I'll be there in half-an-hour

Dr Freeman: Ok.

As I Drove out, I was thinking about how much I paid attention to my job, But didnt pay much attention to her...
I should of gave her a checkup the other day...

I finally reached the hospital..

Nathan: Hello is Dr Freeman here?

Receptionst: Yes If you take a seat he will be here in a few moments

Nathan: Thanks

I was looking around, Then watched the TV, I saw a news report about Max and Alex..

Nathan: Hey Turn it up..

News Reporter: .. the Police are inspecting the aftermaths of a Bank Robbery.. one of the Casulaties in the Roscoe Street Station is DEA Agent Alex Balder.. The Police have Idenified the Gunman as Max Payne...

As soon I heard them words I couldn't believe this... Bank Robbery!?! Killing Alex.. Max would of never have done that.

Dr Freeman: Mr Klenland?

Nathan: Yes

Dr Freeman: This way..

As he lead me to the Ward.. I have the feeling of hell inside of me, like if Satan himself is inside ripping my body parts Gib by Gib

Nathan: I saw my Mothers dead Lifeless body... I feel so sad.. like how the Gameaholic that lost his games..

Dr Freeman: I leave you here Mr Klenland..

Nathan: Mother? I know you can't hear me.. But im so sorry.. I shouldnt of Ignored you *Sobs* if only... I was there to help you instead of worrying about my cases..

*Mobile rings*

Damn I should of turned this off

Nathan: *Sobs* errr. hello?

Scott: Hey, did you get the news.. Are you ok..

Nathan: Yea.. It is just.. well Im at the hospital.. I'll speak to ya later...

I better leave...

Nathan: Mother, I will never forget you...

As I parted from the Hospital.. I had a Feeling I be Meeting my mother.. soon enough

Well there u go, It is a bit late here... But hey I hope u like how it is up to now, A little note for Marimus: Vinnie will be in the next episode or the one after that. so Stay tuned http://forums.3drealms.com/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif

[Mariamus]

Sounds great.

[sufferin-rebel]

Well.. after I left the Hospital.. I went thinking about what I could do next... My mum is dead and my Friend is dead by possibly my own friend. Things didnt add up.. I thought of heading to Roscoe street station.. But The NYPD would be there.. and I havent got Time for them to clarify my idenity... I felt like a Rat in a corner, But I do remember someone who I could talk to, Vinnie Gognitti, It would be hard for me to chat with him.... I Instantly thought of a good way to get to him... I got back in my car and headed back to my Office...

As I headed back I saw BB in a rush to get some files from my cabinet..

Nathan: What you doing?

BB: Ahh Im getting some files, so I can look into them more...

Nathan: Well you could look over them with me...

BB: Nope sorry Nath, My friend is at home and He can see them.. No disrespect.. But my friend has been in the field a lot longer in this trade..

*Runs off*

BB has been at the top of my Suspicous... But the thing is.. I dont no what I am Suspicous about...

I checked Max's Cabinet... I found Infomation about Vinnie Gognitti, he seemed to go to Brothels.. and several other Whore Houses... There was this regular sleazy hotel... He was in there, So I decided to go after him... I got my Beretta and took some Clips with me just in case things got ugly...

I managed to get inside... and Amazing enough the place was Grimmed to the teeth with Mobsters who didnt care about me... So I was ok.... I was going in peoples room acting like a Nosy Neighbour.. I managed to find out that all the rooms had Syringes of a Drug, My guess is was like Heroin but 3 times stronger.... either that or it was like Viagra.. Made sense tho V, For Viagra... But I hated the thought of Injectable Viagra...I contiuned looking for Vinnie, I headed down a Corridor.. and All i heard were Girls doing Fake Orgasms and "Pleasing" there Clients.... I just found Vinnie's Room it sounded like the girl was in the shower... I bashed open the door....

Vinnie: What the Frigging Hell! What the Frigging hell are you meant to be doing here...

Nathan: Heh you know me...

Vinnie: Yea, I mean NO no...

The Girl probally behaved smart and stayed in the shower room

Nathan: I got lots of Questions but Few Anwsers....

I quickly Boarded up the door just in case Gognitti's Lackeys Decided to come in

Vinnie: Im not saying anything Cop!

Nathan: Heh You won't be saying that after this...

*Grabs vinnie and puts the berretta by his head*

Nathan: Eww i think I smell something... Now tell me, Who killed Alex!!!

Vinnie: I dunno what your talking about... ahh shit..

Nathan: Im not in the mood to be SCRewed with Today.. Vin, What in God's ***** name is going on!

Vinnie: Ok i'll talk I'll talk, One of Lupino's Man killed Alex.. and had Max take the Rap for it... For god's Sake dont kill me...

I felt like Squeezeing him more for Infomation.. but I felt like a monster... Even tho he was a Mobster, I threw him back on the Bed and left...

*Vinnie gets his gun*

Vin: Die Cop!

*Nathan shoots the gun out of his hand..*

Nathan: Try anything like that and I will Aim for your head...

I hurried myself out of the building.. like a person at the Olympics trying to win first place...

Things were getting more Sinster, Lupino was a Real Psychotic Murderer... He believed in Death.. and not by were someone dies.. By the Monster form of Death.. and he believes in the End of the world.. Hence the Name of the Club Ragnarock... It all adds up he must be in there... but I will not risk it, I got to find some more Infomation.... My Journey is only beginning, and I'm having a feeling either way, Im dead in the end..