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Egghead316
12-13-2001, 05:51 PM
Hey just wanted to tell you to go to my site & tell me what you think, it's my first site, so don't be too hard on me, k? images/icons/wink.gif

http://www.geocities.com/DrwNMntz


[Edit] Oh yeah I forgot to say that the Max Payne part is finished (well I HOPE it's working right anyway), but everything else is still under construction.

[ 12-13-2001: Message edited by: Egghead316 ]

MuffinMan
12-13-2001, 06:33 PM
A couple of quickies.

1) for a first site it's pretty nice images/icons/smile.gif However, the 'logo' at the top is far to big (vertically) and because you tried to keep the filesize small it's pretty blurry.

2) The buttons for the different games are different sizes. It's a small thing, but it kinda ruins the symmetry of the page.

3) You compressed the (too large images/icons/wink.gif ) header too much, but then you hardly compressed the Max Payne button at all. It's about 60kb which is a little too much generally.

4) The banner on the actual Max Payne page is much nicer and is a better size. Good work.

5) The screenshot gallery looks a little out of sync... the lines of pics don't line up correctly. On page 2 they are much better.

Hope this helps. images/icons/smile.gif

biXen
12-14-2001, 01:31 AM
The color combinations and general layout of the site needs work, but you'll learn that as you go along.

The Baskinator
12-14-2001, 06:00 PM
Originally posted by Egghead316:
Hey just wanted to tell you to go to my site & tell me what you think, it's my first site, so don't be too hard on me, k? images/icons/wink.gif

http://www.geocities.com/DrwNMntz


[Edit] Oh yeah I forgot to say that the Max Payne part is finished (well I HOPE it's working right anyway), but everything else is still under construction.

[ 12-13-2001: Message edited by: Egghead316 ]<font size="2" face="Verdana, Arial">

Hey, looking pretty good, dude. I remember my first webpage was really awful.
Do you mind if I link you on some of my pages?
Keep taking MP screen shots. images/icons/grin.gif

Egghead316
12-14-2001, 09:52 PM
Alright thanks for the advice guys, and I noticed the screenshots on the 1st page were messed up , but couldn't get it fixed (crappy frontpage), but I'll keep trying, and go head & link to me if you want, I'd appreciate it.


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Steve
12-14-2001, 11:48 PM
Never have blue text on a black background. Never. Other than that, it's very good for your first webpage. images/icons/smile.gif