Graphic Novel started.. - Page 3

Wamplet · 12-11-2003, 07:18 PM

Great work Mariamus!

I like where this is going.

Mariamus · 12-11-2003, 07:21 PM

thank you very much Wamplet ^_^

boondocksaint · 12-11-2003, 07:42 PM

so she's max's sister and what happened to max?

Mariamus · 12-11-2003, 07:49 PM

ohh I couldn't say that.. ^_^ YOu'll know soon enough.

Mariamus · 12-11-2003, 09:54 PM

OK!
part 2 - page 6 is uploaded..
this will be the last page of Part 2.. j, you can go read now ^_^

Tyratiev · 12-11-2003, 09:58 PM

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Great work Mariamus!

I like where this is going.

Me too Wamplet...

Wamplet · 12-11-2003, 10:49 PM

^

\o/

Part 2: Page 6 is my current favorite right now. It looks awesome as well as the story.

Poor Vinnie. The little bastard is too busy daydreaming of his Baseball Bat Boy collection.

Tyratiev · 12-11-2003, 11:07 PM

Yea....

I was like.... Uh-oh, something's going on. Vinnie Gognitti, better watch out for Sadie Payne because she's on the prowl for you.

My fav part is the same as yours. hehe.

j · 12-12-2003, 03:13 AM

I'm liking it, but the backgrounds in Part 2 were a bit.. bland. I'd like to see more play with shadows/textures in the background to give the images more feeling.. more punch. The flashback page looked nice, with the dark, shadowy atmosphere, but everything else in Part 2 could've benefited from more interesting backgrounds. Maybe a shadow from a chandelier going across the walls or something like that.

Or another thing I can think of would be to make the backgrounds a bit darker than the characters, I'm pretty sure it would help too, if not as much as adding shadows and shapes.

But, it's your work, and I'm definitely interested in seeing how it'll pan out.

Joel · 12-12-2003, 06:48 AM

I must say, i conform to the positive feedback in this forum regarding this thread. Well done, Mariamus- more please! You're doing a second to none job for fan fiction, especially for a single handed project, brilliant! It's good to see a devoted fellow fan really express their passion in this way.
I'd love to see more fan-based projects like this, although it will be a challenge to match the Mariamus quality.

Again, well done

Bruce Hamilton · 12-12-2003, 07:31 PM

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...better watch out for Sadie Payne...

Who said Sadie's surname was Payne? Maybe she's married...

Mariamus · 12-12-2003, 08:00 PM

*walks in, checks the replies, hums a tune and walks out again.*

Still not saying anything...

expect an update within one or two hours.. got the panels down.. text is missing.. ^_^

Mariamus · 12-12-2003, 09:04 PM

Ok.. caption page for chapter 3 is up.. go look at it! LOL

i'll update asap with the first page...

Mariamus · 12-12-2003, 09:26 PM

OK!! first page of chapter 3 is up

go read it..

Chapter 3

Kevin's girl · 12-12-2003, 09:52 PM

Wow that is really good!

I always look forward to seeing what you're going to do next with the Graphic Novel! It's always exciting and unpredictable! Oh and.. Thank you for entertaining me!

Wamplet · 12-12-2003, 11:09 PM

Die Sadie, DIE!!! \o_

Excellent work!

I can't wait for the next page to include the maggots converting her left over brain mass on the floor into much-needed food! \o/

Mariamus · 12-12-2003, 11:10 PM

ehh.. yumm. i guess...

Wamplet · 12-12-2003, 11:11 PM

The fact that she is having a dream, or nightmare kicks ass. I want her to be haunted by Demons as well as the flesh of fallen angels. Not sure what that would look like in a dream, but...

Mariamus · 12-12-2003, 11:13 PM

well.. don't expect much from me sunday.. it's me and my sister's birthday then..

And no.. we're not twins.. there's a year inbetween us.

Wamplet · 12-12-2003, 11:17 PM

Well, have a happy birthday then. \o_

Keep up the good work.

Mariamus · 12-12-2003, 11:22 PM

thank you ^_^ I'll be 21

HAHAHAAAA!

Raiden93 · 12-12-2003, 11:24 PM

d^_^b Two thumbs up!

Mariamus · 12-12-2003, 11:26 PM

Why thank you Raiden

Yowu Ling · 12-12-2003, 11:34 PM

Love the grafic novel great work, and Happy birthday

Mariamus · 12-12-2003, 11:53 PM

Thank you, and thank you ^_^

Mariamus · 12-16-2003, 08:13 PM

I couldn't help but to play around with the Vinnie model a bit.. So I slapped his head on another body and ended up with this

Wamplet · 12-16-2003, 08:18 PM

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I couldn't help but to play around with the Vinnie model a bit.. So I slapped his head...

Slapped indeed.

Will you be releasing the Rated R versions?

Looks like an in game screenshot.

Mariamus · 12-16-2003, 08:19 PM

wamplet wamplet wamplet.. R rated versions... I'll keep those to myself

ROFL

Mariamus · 12-17-2003, 08:17 PM

Graphic novel has been updated.

Part 3 - Page 2 ready.

Enjoy ^_^

and please post your comments here

Wamplet · 12-17-2003, 08:23 PM

If Vinnie teamed up with Michael Jackson, the two would be unstoppable.

MJ has the ranch and the young lads, while Vinnie supplies the Basball bat boy toys.

Mariamus · 12-17-2003, 08:26 PM

*shudders*
Eww... that's.. eww... O_o!!
disturbing.. images.. flashing..
Must.. carve.. out.. eyes!! ARGH! LOL

Raiden93 · 12-17-2003, 08:29 PM

Wow We!! Vinnie looks hot in that pic with Sadie

Mariamus · 12-17-2003, 08:33 PM

Thank you Raiden. *holds gun to your face.*
Just remember.. he's mine! ^_^ LOL!

Mariamus · 12-17-2003, 11:23 PM

Okily dokily!

From now on, everyone can enter the site from www.mariamus.dk
there will be a link under the welcome image directly to the graphic novel.

Hope you like it ^_^

fmuder · 12-18-2003, 01:39 AM

For awhile, i couldn't find the link, but then i refreshed it and got the page.

Mariamus · 12-18-2003, 01:46 AM

Great ^_^

I hope you like the GN so far

Qtipie · 12-18-2003, 07:03 AM

it's coming along really good. i'm curious about sadie & vinnie

also, the artwork improved. it's more atmospheric.

[OT: fmuder, who's that guy in your avatar? he's definitely a sight for sore eyes

]

Mariamus · 12-18-2003, 07:49 AM

Glad you like it ^_^ Haven't done much about the art other than playing with the lighting..

Raiden93 · 12-18-2003, 04:58 PM

I know Vinnie's yours Mariamus I wont steel your man LOL

Mariamus · 12-18-2003, 05:01 PM

Just making sure

12-11-2003, 07:18 PM	#81
Wamplet	Re: Graphic Novel started.. Great work Mariamus! I like where this is going. __________________ "IT'S HUGE!!!!" -chimera I think it's a 17"... or maybe it's a 19"..... it's huge... and bulky! but it has served me quite well -Mariamus "You're dying after Wamplet and Politics." -L'Bulgeur "By god... Wamp has a point." -Damien_Azreal

12-11-2003, 07:21 PM	#82
Mariamus	Re: Graphic Novel started.. thank you very much Wamplet ^_^ __________________ I would venture to warn against too great intimacy with artists as it is very seductive and a little dangerous.” - Queen Victoria Indeed, America's new slogan is slowly becoming "Land of the free.. unless it offends anyone!" - Hudson

12-11-2003, 07:42 PM	#83
boondocksaint	Re: Graphic Novel started.. so she's max's sister and what happened to max?

12-11-2003, 07:49 PM	#84
Mariamus	Re: Graphic Novel started.. ohh I couldn't say that.. ^_^ YOu'll know soon enough. __________________ I would venture to warn against too great intimacy with artists as it is very seductive and a little dangerous.” - Queen Victoria Indeed, America's new slogan is slowly becoming "Land of the free.. unless it offends anyone!" - Hudson

12-11-2003, 09:54 PM	#85
Mariamus	Re: Graphic Novel started.. OK! part 2 - page 6 is uploaded.. this will be the last page of Part 2.. j, you can go read now ^_^ __________________ I would venture to warn against too great intimacy with artists as it is very seductive and a little dangerous.” - Queen Victoria Indeed, America's new slogan is slowly becoming "Land of the free.. unless it offends anyone!" - Hudson

12-11-2003, 10:49 PM	#87
Wamplet	Re: Graphic Novel started.. ^ \o/ Part 2: Page 6 is my current favorite right now. It looks awesome as well as the story. Poor Vinnie. The little bastard is too busy daydreaming of his Baseball Bat Boy collection. __________________ "IT'S HUGE!!!!" -chimera I think it's a 17"... or maybe it's a 19"..... it's huge... and bulky! but it has served me quite well -Mariamus "You're dying after Wamplet and Politics." -L'Bulgeur "By god... Wamp has a point." -Damien_Azreal

12-11-2003, 11:07 PM	#88
Tyratiev	Re: Graphic Novel started.. Yea.... I was like.... Uh-oh, something's going on. Vinnie Gognitti, better watch out for Sadie Payne because she's on the prowl for you. My fav part is the same as yours. hehe. __________________ <Oscars for Babe of the Year 2003> <Sadie>Thank you for all the people who accepted Vlad's bribe. And for the people who didn't.... rest in peace. <APPLAUSE> </Oscars for Babe of the Year 2003>

12-12-2003, 03:13 AM	#89
j	Re: Graphic Novel started.. I'm liking it, but the backgrounds in Part 2 were a bit.. bland. I'd like to see more play with shadows/textures in the background to give the images more feeling.. more punch. The flashback page looked nice, with the dark, shadowy atmosphere, but everything else in Part 2 could've benefited from more interesting backgrounds. Maybe a shadow from a chandelier going across the walls or something like that. Or another thing I can think of would be to make the backgrounds a bit darker than the characters, I'm pretty sure it would help too, if not as much as adding shadows and shapes. But, it's your work, and I'm definitely interested in seeing how it'll pan out. __________________ "There he goes. One of God's own prototypes. Some kind of high powered mutant never even considered for mass production. Too weird to live, and too rare to die." Jos satut olemaan suomalainen, niin osta paita.

12-12-2003, 06:48 AM	#90
Joel	Re: Graphic Novel started.. I must say, i conform to the positive feedback in this forum regarding this thread. Well done, Mariamus- more please! You're doing a second to none job for fan fiction, especially for a single handed project, brilliant! It's good to see a devoted fellow fan really express their passion in this way. I'd love to see more fan-based projects like this, although it will be a challenge to match the Mariamus quality. Again, well done

12-12-2003, 08:00 PM	#92
Mariamus	Re: Graphic Novel started.. walks in, checks the replies, hums a tune and walks out again. Still not saying anything... expect an update within one or two hours.. got the panels down.. text is missing.. ^_^ __________________ I would venture to warn against too great intimacy with artists as it is very seductive and a little dangerous.” - Queen Victoria Indeed, America's new slogan is slowly becoming "Land of the free.. unless it offends anyone!" - Hudson

12-12-2003, 09:04 PM	#93
Mariamus	Re: Graphic Novel started.. Ok.. caption page for chapter 3 is up.. go look at it! LOL i'll update asap with the first page... __________________ I would venture to warn against too great intimacy with artists as it is very seductive and a little dangerous.” - Queen Victoria Indeed, America's new slogan is slowly becoming "Land of the free.. unless it offends anyone!" - Hudson

12-12-2003, 09:26 PM	#94
Mariamus	Re: Graphic Novel started.. OK!! first page of chapter 3 is up go read it.. Chapter 3 __________________ I would venture to warn against too great intimacy with artists as it is very seductive and a little dangerous.” - Queen Victoria Indeed, America's new slogan is slowly becoming "Land of the free.. unless it offends anyone!" - Hudson

12-12-2003, 09:52 PM	#95
Kevin's girl	Re: Graphic Novel started.. Wow that is really good! I always look forward to seeing what you're going to do next with the Graphic Novel! It's always exciting and unpredictable! Oh and.. Thank you for entertaining me! __________________ www.myspace.com/kevins_sexygirl Is today Jimmy Shaker day?

12-12-2003, 11:09 PM	#96
Wamplet	Re: Graphic Novel started.. Die Sadie, DIE!!! \o_ Excellent work! I can't wait for the next page to include the maggots converting her left over brain mass on the floor into much-needed food! \o/ __________________ "IT'S HUGE!!!!" -chimera I think it's a 17"... or maybe it's a 19"..... it's huge... and bulky! but it has served me quite well -Mariamus "You're dying after Wamplet and Politics." -L'Bulgeur "By god... Wamp has a point." -Damien_Azreal

12-12-2003, 11:10 PM	#97
Mariamus	Re: Graphic Novel started.. ehh.. yumm. i guess... __________________ I would venture to warn against too great intimacy with artists as it is very seductive and a little dangerous.” - Queen Victoria Indeed, America's new slogan is slowly becoming "Land of the free.. unless it offends anyone!" - Hudson

12-12-2003, 11:11 PM	#98
Wamplet	Re: Graphic Novel started.. The fact that she is having a dream, or nightmare kicks ass. I want her to be haunted by Demons as well as the flesh of fallen angels. Not sure what that would look like in a dream, but... __________________ "IT'S HUGE!!!!" -chimera I think it's a 17"... or maybe it's a 19"..... it's huge... and bulky! but it has served me quite well -Mariamus "You're dying after Wamplet and Politics." -L'Bulgeur "By god... Wamp has a point." -Damien_Azreal

12-12-2003, 11:13 PM	#99
Mariamus	Re: Graphic Novel started.. well.. don't expect much from me sunday.. it's me and my sister's birthday then.. And no.. we're not twins.. there's a year inbetween us. __________________ I would venture to warn against too great intimacy with artists as it is very seductive and a little dangerous.” - Queen Victoria Indeed, America's new slogan is slowly becoming "Land of the free.. unless it offends anyone!" - Hudson

12-12-2003, 11:17 PM	#100
Wamplet	Re: Graphic Novel started.. Well, have a happy birthday then. \o_ Keep up the good work. __________________ "IT'S HUGE!!!!" -chimera I think it's a 17"... or maybe it's a 19"..... it's huge... and bulky! but it has served me quite well -Mariamus "You're dying after Wamplet and Politics." -L'Bulgeur "By god... Wamp has a point." -Damien_Azreal

12-12-2003, 11:22 PM	#101
Mariamus	Re: Graphic Novel started.. thank you ^_^ I'll be 21 HAHAHAAAA! __________________ I would venture to warn against too great intimacy with artists as it is very seductive and a little dangerous.” - Queen Victoria Indeed, America's new slogan is slowly becoming "Land of the free.. unless it offends anyone!" - Hudson

12-12-2003, 11:24 PM	#102
Raiden93	Re: Graphic Novel started.. d^_^b Two thumbs up!

12-12-2003, 11:26 PM	#103
Mariamus	Re: Graphic Novel started.. Why thank you Raiden __________________ I would venture to warn against too great intimacy with artists as it is very seductive and a little dangerous.” - Queen Victoria Indeed, America's new slogan is slowly becoming "Land of the free.. unless it offends anyone!" - Hudson

12-12-2003, 11:34 PM	#104
Yowu Ling	Re: Graphic Novel started.. Love the grafic novel great work, and Happy birthday __________________ “Better to die on your feet than live on your knees.” - Ibarruri&Caesar

12-12-2003, 11:53 PM	#105
Mariamus	Re: Graphic Novel started.. Thank you, and thank you ^_^ __________________ I would venture to warn against too great intimacy with artists as it is very seductive and a little dangerous.” - Queen Victoria Indeed, America's new slogan is slowly becoming "Land of the free.. unless it offends anyone!" - Hudson

12-16-2003, 08:19 PM	#108
Mariamus	Re: Graphic Novel started.. wamplet wamplet wamplet.. R rated versions... I'll keep those to myself ROFL __________________ I would venture to warn against too great intimacy with artists as it is very seductive and a little dangerous.” - Queen Victoria Indeed, America's new slogan is slowly becoming "Land of the free.. unless it offends anyone!" - Hudson

12-17-2003, 08:17 PM	#109
Mariamus	Re: Graphic Novel started.. Graphic novel has been updated. Part 3 - Page 2 ready. Enjoy ^_^ and please post your comments here __________________ I would venture to warn against too great intimacy with artists as it is very seductive and a little dangerous.” - Queen Victoria Indeed, America's new slogan is slowly becoming "Land of the free.. unless it offends anyone!" - Hudson

12-17-2003, 08:23 PM	#110
Wamplet	Re: Graphic Novel started.. If Vinnie teamed up with Michael Jackson, the two would be unstoppable. MJ has the ranch and the young lads, while Vinnie supplies the Basball bat boy toys. __________________ "IT'S HUGE!!!!" -chimera I think it's a 17"... or maybe it's a 19"..... it's huge... and bulky! but it has served me quite well -Mariamus "You're dying after Wamplet and Politics." -L'Bulgeur "By god... Wamp has a point." -Damien_Azreal

12-17-2003, 08:26 PM	#111
Mariamus	Re: Graphic Novel started.. shudders Eww... that's.. eww... O_o!! disturbing.. images.. flashing.. Must.. carve.. out.. eyes!! ARGH! LOL __________________ I would venture to warn against too great intimacy with artists as it is very seductive and a little dangerous.” - Queen Victoria Indeed, America's new slogan is slowly becoming "Land of the free.. unless it offends anyone!" - Hudson

12-17-2003, 08:29 PM	#112
Raiden93	Re: Graphic Novel started.. Wow We!! Vinnie looks hot in that pic with Sadie

12-17-2003, 08:33 PM	#113
Mariamus	Re: Graphic Novel started.. Thank you Raiden. holds gun to your face. Just remember.. he's mine! ^_^ LOL! __________________ I would venture to warn against too great intimacy with artists as it is very seductive and a little dangerous.” - Queen Victoria Indeed, America's new slogan is slowly becoming "Land of the free.. unless it offends anyone!" - Hudson

12-17-2003, 11:23 PM	#114
Mariamus	Re: Graphic Novel started.. Okily dokily! From now on, everyone can enter the site from www.mariamus.dk there will be a link under the welcome image directly to the graphic novel. Hope you like it ^_^ __________________ I would venture to warn against too great intimacy with artists as it is very seductive and a little dangerous.” - Queen Victoria Indeed, America's new slogan is slowly becoming "Land of the free.. unless it offends anyone!" - Hudson